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Chapter 4
A Whole Day in Paradise?

" Mmm... " I mumbled. I yawned and rubbed my eyes. " Huh? " I felt a chill on the back of

my neck. I turned to face... Onii-chan!! My face turned red. He looks so adorable when he

is sleeping. I closed my eyes and slowly leaned in. I pecked him on the cheek. " hmmm? "

Naruto mumbled. I was startled. I jumped up and fell off the bed. " Gahh! " I landed on my

ass. Naruto got up and rubbed his eyes. " Hmm, Hinata. What are you doing on the floor? "

He asked. " N-Nothing... Haha Im going to make breakfast.... Hehehe " I awkwardly laughed.

Naruto gave me a stupid expression. " Well, I have an awesome day planned so Im making

breakfast. You get ready. " Naruto mumbled. I smiled and went in my room to change. After

changing I went downstairs to eat breakfast. " Hinata, Eat up. We are leaving in a few

minutes. " Onii-chan said. " Where are we going? " I asked scarfing down bacon.  " Its a

surprise " He mumbled. After eating, I put on my a cute outfit and went downstairs. Onii-

chan stood speechless. " You look.... so..... cute!! I could just eat you... " Onii-chan

squealed and pinched my cheeks. " You always treat me like a child... " I mumbled. I acted

as I was mature but... my heart was racing!! Onii-chan looked at me with intense eyes. "

No really... Hinata you look pretty today. " He whispered. My heart was about to jump out

of my chest. " T-Thank you. Onii-chan. " I mumbled. He took my hand and dragged me into

the car. " Lets go! " He yelled as he drove away. " Could you at least give me a hint to

where we are going. " I asked. " Someplace we always used to go.... " Onii-chan mumbled.

He stopped and paused. " Im not sure you remember... but there... I saved you on that

day.. " He mumbled. My eyes widened. I smiled. " Of course I remember, how can I forget

something so important... " I mumbled. I looked at Naruto. He was blushing. " Pp...

Pwahahahahhaa " He laughed. " W-W-Whats so funny? " I asked. Naruto looked as though he

was going to die from laughing. His face was red. " Oh Geesh, I cant breathe. " He

mumbled. We arrived at a beach. " Huh? I thought we were going to the park... the one you

saved me at. " I mumbled. Naruto looked away. " What are you talking about? I never saved

you in the park. You remember. Haha you couldnt swim and I had to save you. Aww you were

so cute. Your crying face was priceless.. " He laughed. I looked down. " How could you

forget... " I mumbled. " Huh? You say something? " He asked. I looked up, tears welled up

in my eyes. Naruto's eyes widened. " Hi-Hinata? " He tried to comfort me. " It hurts you

know.... " I mumbled. " W-What hurts... I dont understand? " He said. " Forget it... lets

just have fun... Im going to put on my bathing suit. " I mumbled and wiped my tears. I

finished getting dressed and walked over to Onii-chan. He was laying down on a chair.

Gahh!! He looks so adorable. His skin looks so smooth. His abs were just.... ungh... w-

what am I thinking... I sighed. I love him so much I cant bring myself to hate him.

Suddenly, Onii-chan reached up and wrapped his arms around my waist. He pulled me on top

of him. He started to grab my boobs. " Wow, they have gotten bigger... " He mumbled. He

kept squeezing them without thinking of what I feel. " Gahhh! S-Stop it! " I squealed and

jumped up. Onii-chan laughed. " Lets go in the water. " He said. I went into the water.

Its so cold!! " Oh hey look at her! " a voice whispered. " Yeah she has a nice body right.

" Big breast too. " " Come on.. " the voices said. I shook in fear. They took my shoulder

and turned me around. " Hey beautiful. Wanna hang with us? " the guy said. He looks drunk.

" Im sorry, p-please let me go. " I mumbled. " Aww come on dont be shy.. " the other guy

mumbled. He took hold of my waist and grabbed my wrist. " Come on... we just wanna play...

for a while.. " He whispered. " You reek of alcohol " I mumbled. Tears began running down

my cheeks. He started to forcibly drag me into the bathroom. " No!! Stop!! " I cried. "

GET THE HELL AWAY FROM HER YOU BASTARD!! " a voice shouted. A strange guy came and kicked

the guy's face. He punched the other one. " Leave her alone... " He stared intensely into

their eyes. The guys ran in fear. I plopped on my knees and cried. " T-Thank you.. " I

whispered. As I looked up, my eyes widened. " Are you alright, Hinata. " he said. " Onii-

chan... " I mumbled. I hugged him tightly. Everyone stared. " Oh look what a cute couple..

" the people whispered. I blushed. He took my hand and dragged me over to a chair. He sat

me down and took out a tissue. " Every time I take my eyes off you, you always get

yourself in trouble... " He said as he wiped my face. " But Its my job... to keep you

safe.. " He mumbled. I blushed even harder. I wish I could just shout it out to the world,

IM IN LOVE WITH NARUTO ONII-CHAN. But I cant.... Naruto and I went in the water. " Hold on

let me get a drink, you can stay in the water if you want. " He said. I got out and dried

myself. As Naruto was getting his drink, girls began whispering. " Hey that guy is kinda

cute, right. " one girl whispered. " Yeah, I wouldnt mind if he was my boyfriend... I

wonder how old he is... " the girls started to approach him. I ran in front of them. "

What are you doing? " the girl said. " Get out of our way. " she demanded. I shook my

head. " Your going to talk to him right. " I said. " Oh so missy with the big boobs over

here thinks she could get with him. Your just some whore... a slut who sleeps around. "

they said. I gritted my teeth. " He has a girlfriend.. " I said. " Hmm? Really? Who? "

they asked. " M-Me... " I mumbled. " Haha sure yeahh... prove it.. " They demanded. I took

a deep breath and walked boldly over to Onii-chan. I tapped him on his shoulder. As he

turned around I quickly grabbed his cheeks and kissed him. The girls gasped. " Ugh!! "

They shouted and stomped away. I pulled away and opened my eyes. Naruto was staring at me.

" I-I-Im sorry!! " I said. Naruto blushed. He looked mad. He walked away without a word.

Why did.... I do that... ?? I put my hand on my lips. My first kiss... huh? I smiled.

After a while, it got late and we went home. Naruto changed and plopped on the couch. I

walked over to Naruto. " Onii-chan? " I asked. As I got closer, Naruto grabbed my arm and

threw me on the couch. He got on top of me. " W-What are you doing?? " I mumbled. He

started kissing my neck. " St-Stop.. " I mumbled. I didnt want this. I love him but this

is too sudden!! He started to unbutton my shirt and he kissed me forcibly on the lips

pinning me on the couch. I couldnt move. " I SAID STOP!! " I screamed and slapped him. "

See, this is how it feels when you take advantage of people. " He mumbled. " Y-You kissed

me and harassed me without even warning me... " I complained. " Yeah well you did the same

at the beach. Kissing me all of a sudden. We are siblings! Nothing more than that. " He

shouted. " I only did that to protect you!! Those girls were going to try and get with you

and I just.... " I whispered. " Why? What if I didnt mind... would you do that.. " He

said. He looked so angry. I started crying. " Im sorry, Onii-chan.... I know we are just

siblings... I know that well.. but it hurts.... it hurts.. because I love you.... not as a

brother but as a man. Im in love with you..... " I whispered. Naruto's eyes widened. "

Hinata... I love you... but only as a sister.. and besides... Im engaged... to Sakura....

" He mumbled. " W-What!! " I screamed. He sat down beside me and I buttoned up my shirt. "

Whens the wedding... " I mumbled. " 2 weeks. " He said. " Why didnt you tell me... " I

asked. " I was going to... today.. " He said. " Im not giving up... " I mumbled. " Huh? "

He said. " I love you more than anything. Im not giving up so easily. She doesnt deserve

you. I will make you fall in love with me!! " I yelled. Naruto's eyes widened. " Hinata,

face reality.. I could never..... love you... What would everyone else think huh? A

brother and sister... in love? Its wrong. Hinata stop loving me.... love someone else...

thats worth it.. " He mumbled. " No... I cant. You are the only one I could ever love!!

Naruto... dont marry Sakura... M-Marry me..... Please... " I said. Naruto turned away. "

No.... " He whispered. He walked away from me, he never turned back. He is slipping out of

my fingers. Is this the end?? The doorbell rang... I went to open it... there standing

there smiling was... Naruto's fiance Sakura!?

TO BE CONTINUED...........

NEXT: NaruHinaSasu: Onii-chan!! Chap. 5 Confession
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AnimeWriter101 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
she did something to naruto i know it i thought it was real at first but sakura can't just be at that door hearing everything acting like she knew this would happen
Minilatina Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
yepp :)
MadMadi24 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
GRRR Sakura you pain in the boosom!!!
Minilatina Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
lmaooo ikrr
kibahina180 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yay she finally told him!!!
I hate Sakura at the moment.
Minilatina Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
lol it gets better trust me :)
kibahina180 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
okay I give you my trust. Use wisely
Minilatina Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
lmaoo okay
kibahina180 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XxXeXoNxX Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OrengRackun Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
LavenderHyuuga27 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012
I read the rest of it n I change my mind..... I HATE U SAKURA!!!
Minilatina Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
hoppingbunny365 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012
Wow...DRAMA BOMB!!!!!!!!
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