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Chapter 4
Her Painful Experience

A month passed. I have heard nothing from Naruto. Im forced to be the maid of this man,

Akuma. He constantly rapes and abuses me. Everyday I look in the mirror, I have bruises.

Im sure I wont survive another month of this. My body will soon rot. This punishment is

beyond what I expected. Why would he put me through such pain. For the first time in my

life, I felt hated... I felt useless... I felt like I wanted to die. I should have never

accepted this. If I hadnt I would have never been in this situation. Another day passed,

then another, then the next... Almost 2 months. I look in the mirror once more. That

night, bruises were all over my body. Hundreds of hickeys on my neck, hand marks on my

boobs for he squeezed too hard, I couldnt sit for weeks. I'd cry myself to sleep. Finally,

the day had come. After 2 months of torture, I would finally go back. " Finally... " I

mumbled as I packed my things. I tried as best as I could to hide my bruises. I took of my

uniform and put it in my suitcase. I made sure I wore sweat pants, sneakers, a hoodie, and

sunglasses. I walked out and went into the limousine. Akuma stared at me. He gave me a

devious smile. " Worth it... " He said under his breath. I glared at him and slammed the

car door shut. Not long we arrived at Naruto's mansion. I couldn't hold back my tears once

I got out of the car. Everyone was there waiting for my arrival. I ran into Aiya's arms.

Haru, Fuko, and Chizuko gave me a group hug. Naruto walked up to me along with Itachi. "

So...the punishment? " He said. I looked up. " Why are you all covered up? " Naruto asked.

I hesitated. " I was cold... " I mumbled. " Its summer. Its 90 degrees out here. " Naruto

said. I looked down. Naruto forcefully took off my sunglasses and my hoodie. I covered

myself with my arms. I refuse to take off my sweatshirt. Naruto raised his hand. I cried.

That hand. It was just like Akuma's. When he would slap me or hit me when I'd mess up. I

rememeber the words I would say to Akuma everytime. " Please dont hurt me!! I promise I

wont mess it up again! So please dont cause me anymore pain, Akuma-sama! " I screamed. My

eyes widened. I didnt realize I had said it out loud. My arms slowly lowered. Naruto only

raised his hand to stop Itachi from forcefully taken my sweatshirt off. Naruto's eyes

widened. My face and neck were revealed. I had bruises on my eyes and forehead. I had cuts

on my lips/ There were scratch marks on my chest quite deep. Hundreds of hickeys were

revealed also. I stood there speechless. Haru started to cry. " What did he do to you!? "

Chizuko shouted. Aiya and Fuko ran towards me. " What happened? " They asked. I covered my

face. " He raped me! He abused me everyday! I couldnt sit for weeks! " I shouted. Naruto

walked away without a word. I was taken inside and treated to my wounds. Naruto called a

doctor to check up on me. " Alright, Hinata. I am Doctor Karin Fujioka. Let me see the

wounds. " the doctor said. I took off my blouse and bra. " Oh my! What happened, dear!? "

she asked. " I was raped and abused... for two months. " I mumbled. " Oh my... Im very

sorry to hear that. Dont worry I will treat you right away. " she said. She gently applied

medicine to my bruises, cuts, and scratches. " You must rest. It must still hurt to sit,

right? Wait until the throbbing stops. Apply medicine after you shower. " she said and

handed me the medicine. She waved goodbye and left. Naruto walked in. My clothes were

still off. I turned around and blushed. " W-What are you doing!! " I squealed. " Just be

quiet... " He said. I closed my eyes. Was he going to rape me too!? My eyes widened.

Naruto gently placed his hands on my back. He turned me around and started feeling around

my neck and chin. He stared at my eyes. " Im so sorry. This wasnt the punishment that I

wanted. I never wanted it to go that far, I swear. " He said. " I know... " I mumbled. I

put on my clothes and laid on the bed in Naruto's chambers. " You may sleep here for

tonight.. I have some... " work " to take care of. " Naruto said. I closed my eyes and

rested. " Master! Where are you going! " Itachi yelled. " Im going to go after that

bastard. " Naruto shouted. He slammed the car shut and drove off. He arrived at Akuma's

mansion. He banged on the door. Akuma opened up. " Oh are you here to give her back, now?

Is she too much to handle? Or does she want more punishment.. " Akuma said desviously as

he licked chocolate off his fingers. Naruto gritted his teeth and punched him dead in the

face. Akuma fell to the ground. " What the fuck is wrong with you!! We had a deal! You

were to punish her!! Not rape her you bastard!! You seriously crossed the line! Im going

to make you regret ever touching her!! Im the only one who could touch her!!! Bastards

like you should die!! " Naruto yelled. Akuma laughed. " Oh now I see... you love her dont

you.. " Akuma said. Naruto paused. " I dont love her... She is part of my staff... no my

family.. If my family gets hurt, they are gunna hear from me! " Naruto yelled. " Im going

to destroy you puny little family! Im going to make you suffer!! " Naruto shouted. He

raised a gun at Akuma's face. " If you ever set foot in my mansion, or ever talk to her

again.. I wont hesitate to pull this trigger.. you got that!? " Naruto said. Akuma nodded

in fear. " Fucking pussy... " Naruto mumbled furiously as he left the house. He drove back

to the mansion. As he arrived, I waited in front of the door. " What are you doing, you'll

get sick!! " Naruto yelled. " I wanted to thank you... for what you did... I-I really

appreciate it.. " I said. I smiled. Naruto embraced me. " Dont ever scare me like that

again. " Naruto whispered. " I wont, ouji-sama... " I mumbled. " No.. dont call me that..

" He said. He pulled away and stared at me. " Your part of the family now. So call me,

Naruto-kun. " He said. " N-Naruto.. -k-kun " I said softly. Naruto bit his lip. His face

turned red. " W-What? Naruto-kun? " I asked. " How the hell can you say that so casually.

Gahh! Dont look at me with your cute face! Wait... what am I thinking? I-I dont love

Hinata... D-Do I?? " Naruto thought...

TO BE CONTINUED...........

Chapter 5 Sneak Peak:

Its been a month since then. The wounds had disappeared. Now I can go back to work!

" K-Karou! " I shouted. Karou was my childhood friend. I havent seen him in so long. He

really grew up to be really handsome. I remember our parents used to say we were the

cutest couple. I was in love with Kaoru.. ever since we were little kids... until he moved

away. Now hes back! But whats this? Naruto? He seems quite mad about all this. Is he

perhaps.... jealous??

Find out in Chapter 5 of NaruHina: Maid-sama
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Short chapter sorry :/ lol
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NaruHinaRyu Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2015  New Deviant
He just punched the guy? Really, that's it? He should have beat him until he was unrecognizable? Then destroy his family & burn his house. Seriously under punishment. Naruto is rich and entitled, & this other not quite rich enough OC broke his work with his prince, took his prize/property and all he gets is a punch? For 2 whole months of torturing and raping Hinata multiple times. Doesn't make sense. I want more pain and suffering for him. And how could she forgive Naruto so easily? I didn't mean it, doesn't quite cut it after 2 months of torture, maybe if it had been 1 week. Or just once, then he could claim, he didn't know. But that long a time leaves psychological scars. Specially if she was a virgin. This should have happened after Naruto slept with Hinata would have made more sense.
Ekush Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aww I thought Naruto would be the one with whom Hinata would.... *cough* Anyway I cried while I read it :'( 
LilyRose98 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Student Filmographer
Why oh why!? :icontears-plz: Why does she got rapped by that bastard!? Poor Hinata..Update soon!! :) Please! I can't wait XD
Minilatina Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
haha today and tomorrow update is most likely and yeh ik Akuma must pay!! >:o
LilyRose98 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Student Filmographer
Okay hehehe XD Yeah! Naruto should just use kyuubi or bijuu mode but that doesn't exist in the story XD
Minilatina Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
ik lmaoo but you know what happens he sends the butler o.o LMFAOOO
LilyRose98 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Student Filmographer
Hehehehe :D
Hinatta-Chan-2010 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012
poor Hinata T3T i felt like punching the guy so bad!!! u bastard!! i'll kick u where the sun doesn't shine!! :matrixfight:

i really like the chapter, if akuma in a future chapter dies i'll say this... HELL YEAH!! :D
things look like they're going to be better now, so i'm happy for that ;)
LOL someone's jealous!! :wow: (he should be!) xDD

good luck~~ :happybounce:
Minilatina Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
haha thnx ^-^ and oh im sure he is actually guna die in one of the chapters by Naruto's hand because Akuma supposedly did a serious crime
Hinata-Miyako Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Student General Artist
\o\o\o\oo\o\o\o\ MORE!! *----------------------------*
tazarasei9 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
why did she have to get raped!!!!!!! I was sooo sad!!!!! but still whys can't it be longer write more!!!!!!!
Minilatina Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
lol ik akuma must pay 0-0
tazarasei9 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
he really must i hate!!!!! him
Minilatina Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
lmaooo ikrr!!
HinataUzumaki27 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012
Noon!!!! Keep goin!!
Minilatina Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I will I will!!
HinataUzumaki27 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012
Yay!!! :squee:
NaruH1na Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
neext neextt neeext :squee:
Minilatina Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
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